Talk:White as lilies was her face (John Dowland)

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Bar 11: Stanza 6 - fouls for soul's (Mistaking long 's' for 'f')
Bar 15: Stanza 8 - ere for e'er.
Bar 16: Stanza 2- groaning for grieving. It needs to rhyme with relieving.
Bar 16-end: Stanza 8 - penultimate line repeated. Replaced by last line of poem.
Jamesgibb (talk) 13:52, 10 April 2017 (UTC)

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