Talk:Dame Venus hence to Paphos go (Thomas Bateson)

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"fields" throughout should probably be "field", firstly to rhyme with "shield" and secondly because the reference is to the field of battle.
"thunderest" (2nd person singular) should be "thundereth".
Bar 1: Alto C on "Ve-" should be B.
Bar 5: Bass F on "is" should probably be F sharp.
Bar 7: Bass F on "not" should probably be F sharp.
Bar 8: Alto F on "with" should probably be F sharp.
Bar 14: Bass F on "is" should probably be F sharp.
Bar 16: Bass F on "not" should probably be F sharp.
Bar 17: Alto F on "with" should probably be F sharp.
Jamesgibb 04:38, 10 July 2011 (CDT)